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Congratulations on frontpage, and good luck in the AIM contest!
Thanks, good luck to you too!
My favorite Good Kid song, I couldn’t believe how good this was when I heard it the first time!!! This is actually perfect man!!
My only complaint here is that so many of the instruments are square waves… I would have liked to see more variety there.
If that’s what you’re referring to when you say “it turned out badly,” then it’s a pretty easy fix!
Everything else was nice! The drums were great as usual, and the melodic ideas are awesome. Keep it up!
Love the ethereal vocals, the reverb really reinforces the atmosphere. The ticking of the clock is a nice touch as well.
Everything about this is nice, but the atmosphere is what sells it for me!
thank you :)
Dude, this seriously sounds like @WaterFlame!!! Love the nostalgic vibe!
WE MUST GET @WATERFLAME TO COMMENT ON THIS!!!
Aaaand on to summer! Brace yourselves, 100 degree heat waves are coming…
This is super clean, dang
Love how you used the vocal chops, and how everything is chopped like that. It gives the song a very fun and groovy vibe!
Thank you so much!!! <333
Positives: the drums are very good. Everything about them is nice and crisp. You are very good at communicating which genre is being conveyed with the drum patterns. The song is also structured in an interesting, creative way. I liked the way you transitioned from one genre to the next seamlessly. Good job to both of you!
Negatives: the stringed instrument doesn’t fit the song very well imo, and its long release time muddles the notes together.
Some of the notes of the song kinda clashed a bit with the chords behind them, which caused a rather unpleasant dissonance.
Overall: This song has a lot of really interesting ideas that not many artists are attempting right now. However there were a few elements that were holding it back. Just keep going, keep making music, and stay inspired! This is a cool concept that I would like to hear more of!
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Thank you! i'm very happy that you liked the track, It is a motivation for me to know that some think that we are proposing different ideas. When there is an uncountable amount of music, it is difficult to propose something different, but I try to do it despite my own limitations (like my hearing loss)
Thank you for listen the track and make a very complete review.
This one definitely has an edgy, intense vibe to it. Second drop goes crazy! Keep it up!
You’re so good at composing this stuff!!
Exploring the endless possibilities of conveying complex emotions in music since 2021! 🤯
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