This is a really good concept, but I think the drums get drowned out in some parts.
This is a really good concept, but I think the drums get drowned out in some parts.
yes. i remake it
This is so liquid and fluid! The sound design is really nice. Keep it up!
Thank You for the compliments. i have no intentions of stopping. :)
Dude I literally have like 4 unfinished songs total, how do you have this many and they’re all pretty good
I mean like those songs are from 2 or 3 years ago.. And that was sorta the time when i had no idea what music to make, so i sorta made everything.. i still do to some extent but yeah.. i do sit like atleast on average 1-2 hours in fl studio every day lol so, there are a lot of songs that i just stop working on because i get burnt out or whatever
Definitely lives up to the title XD
Your vocal splicing skills are actually insane!
Thank you so much!! :))
Holy heck I hope I’m making stuff like this when I’m freakin 19
Hell yeah bro! Keep at it! I usually make stuff like this while under a sugar mania from a 2 liter bottle of coke or pepsi! u could try it out xD
This is a really weird and fun concept! I would love to hear more like this!
Wow, lucky, you got a TL review! Just listen to what he says, honestly.
EDIT: You could get chatGPT to summarize it for you
I can barely understand anything he’s saying tbh.
Judge review:
Creativity: 29/40
This is quite a lot the same as the original, just with different instruments. The last part definitely saved you here. Structure was very sound, although quite the same as mine. I wish I could have seen more of your style come through here, Dynamic0! Still a very fun listen, however, and that last part where you put in your own melody and kind of jammed out to it was very nice.
Technical: 17/25
The mixing could have been a bit better, and everything feels a little messy. Especially how quiet the drums and bass are. It also feels like there are a lot more mid-high frequencies than low, but I can’t prove that for sure so I won’t count off for that. Just keep improving!
Atmosphere: 9/10
You said in your description that you were working on atmosphere, and it paid off! While technically unsound it still boasts a very engaging atmosphere that is very immersive for the listener. Great work here!
Instrumentation: 7/10
Your main lead is awesome! Adds to the uplifting feel of this track. Drums work well too, if they were a bit louder! Everything in the background is nice. Love everything except for the pads in the drop… they don’t feel very effective to me. It’s a very key part of the song. But it also sets up the rest of the instruments to shine in an interesting way.
Overall: 10/15
This is a fun remix, and the melodies you added were nice! Just would have wanted more of your musical personality on display. Mixing skills will come, just keep practicing and take peoples advice, that’s how we all improve!
Total: 72/100
Great job on this, there was a lot of experience in this contest, and I loved ALL of these tracks. Keep improving, keep creating, because the process of getting better is so rewarding. Thank you for participating, and make sure to listen to the other entries, everyone did great!
Thanks for the massive judge review!
This is my fifth remix ever, so my remixes are not the best remixes you can see on NG. Thanks for appreciating my melody!
I think the mixing depends on what device are you listening. I mixed it with headphones and I heard the bass and drums quite a lot, now I'm listening to it on mobile and I'm lacking the elements you mentioned.
I'm glad you like the atmosphere! I'm trying to put a little bit of my feelings to every track, and I think it improves the atmosphere.
I've maded every instrument except drums from scratch, almost no presets (only sinewave used)! As you said, the pad is a key part of the song and from retrospective, it's too blurry.
Once again, thanks for the review!
All reviews were done on my BEST pair of headphones, which specialize in audio quality.
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