I’m not sure this is exactly phonk, but some of the synths are really interesting! Very acidic sounds
It feels a bit empty in some parts, recommend adding maybe some more reverb or something. Fun song overall, keep it up!
I’m not sure this is exactly phonk, but some of the synths are really interesting! Very acidic sounds
It feels a bit empty in some parts, recommend adding maybe some more reverb or something. Fun song overall, keep it up!
Ah yes, needs some more atmospheric depth. Good ear!
Really atmospheric, has an almost nostalgic vibe. The ear candy really helps with that nature vibe, like the birds chirping and everything. However, I wish the melody wasn’t as repetitive throughout the entire duration of the song. Overall, still a neat song that deserves its spot on the front page!
Everything is crisp and clean as usual, and ofc the atmosphere is “luscious” as well. Cool song!
Thank you so much!! I wanted to bring back that atmospheric vibe and on the next song the vibes will change a lil bit more!
Catchy, funky, crazy!! That bass certainly does some insane stuff. I love how the style of the song seems to change as it goes on, you’ve packed a LOT into this 2 minutes 36 seconds of music!
I knew when I clicked the tag "indietronica" and a breakcore track was the first thing I saw, I was gonna like it. Literally my two favorite styles of music in one
Fun and bouncy glitch hop beat! As usual you’ve got a really fun and vibrant lead, and I love it this time around as well! Your style is so upbeat and I can’t wait to hear more of it, keep it up!
Really inferesting sound design in those chord stabs! They sound very fluid, and I suspect they have some color bass influence? The drum pattern is a bit basic but the simplicity works. I will say tho in some parts it feels a little monotonous.
The key change is very solid! The two different keys carry two completely different moods, two completely different interpretations of the exact same context ig. The outro is really cool, I love the ambient noises. It sounds so much different than the rest of the song and I vibe with that.
Making music consistently is a REAL challenge, one that I also struggle with quite a bit. Since I can’t get over that obstacle either I’m not going to try to give you advice bc it will most likely be detrimental… instead I’ll wish you luck in overcoming this and look forward to the music you have in store!
I absolutely agree with everything you said, but my goal was to get my ass to finish this song, even if it didn't quite hit my inital expectations, at least it got finished in terms of the song length I was aiming for. I decided to still release it although I definitely had my doubts already hitting that publish button. Might still give it an update or two to improve on it more with your feedback. I hope so too that I can overcome this consistancy issue. Thank you so much for your review and support! :)
Positively OOZES uplifting energy! Love this upbeat waltz, especially those sections where you go up the chromatic scale in chords— that is a really fun touch to a fun song in general. Nice composition!
Thank you very much! It was quite interesting to compose too, I'm often more on the darker side. The intro kind of contrasts with the rest of this waltz, a bit like being cheered up by entering into the carnival. I feel like it gives the following parts even more uplifting energy :P I'm glad you enjoyed!
I loved the original Empress, and I love the direction you’ve taken it here as well! It’s so much more upbeat but filled to the brim with beautiful sounds. Amazing track!
Love this! All the melodic ideas are super fun, and I love the chords. It positively SCREAMS happiness to me, and I like that. The mix could be a little better, but it’s MuseScore so of course it’s not like you have any control over that. Keep it up!
Actually this is a rare case of one of my songs without musescore, just ableton live, but I get your point, maybe I could improve the first lead sound. Maybe choosing the chords was the funniest part, and THANK YOU for the feedback!
These are the chords! (over B major) I - V7/iii - iii - IV - iv - I - ii/iii - V7/iii - IV - V7
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