This track is incredible! I love the Sharks-like sound design and atmosphere, especially in the second verse. The vocals compliment the mood well. I love the contrast between the intense first drop and the mellow second! Keep it up, veryfakeguest!
This track is incredible! I love the Sharks-like sound design and atmosphere, especially in the second verse. The vocals compliment the mood well. I love the contrast between the intense first drop and the mellow second! Keep it up, veryfakeguest!
THIS IS INCREDIBLE, KEEP IT UP GUYS
Vaguely reminds me of fantasyworld! Love how you focused on the slightly disconcerting undertones of the image instead of the obvious “omg they’re flying.” That shows a real understanding of the mood of the art, and it shows that you put a lot of thought into this. Nice work, good luck with AIM!
Thank you thank you thank you! I'm glad that you like this style i went for :) and you're right, that song was definitely a subconscious inspiration.
You’ll never know how fast I hit that follow button after this started playing
Love this throwback to 80s pop! The instrumentation really sells that retro atmosphere, and the key change at the end is also very fitting for the mood. You’ve used every element masterfully for this sound, keep it up Burner!
Glad you liked it, thank you so much =]
This is an incredible blend of genres, I really like how the track gradually develops that DnB feel. The jazz seems to somehow fit in perfectly with the chaotic breaks, which cannot have been easy! Props to both of you, it sounds incredible!
Thanks score! Glad you liked it 🔥
I don’t think this is necessarily phonk, except in instrumentation. But that’s not really a bad thing, in fact I like this unique project a lot! Some critique— the drum beat felt a little underwhelming, especially with the snare being on the weak beats. It made the whole track feel slightly off-kilter in a sense. But, a decent track as a whole! Always good to see you experiment with new genres and styles :)
EDIT: not underwhelming as in quiet (trust me the volume is good), but underwhelming as in weak. This can be caused by the placement of drums on the weak beats (1 and 3).
Just with the volume and the distortion of the drums and the fact that this is a PHONK experiment, I didn’t think that’s what you were going for
Thanks! The reason the beat is so soft is cause if I made it any louder it would start clipping like no tomorrow XD
Ohhh, I see, so the drum beat is weak? Guess I just gotta practice XD… don’t worry, better shi is coming
Beautifully melancholic piano piece! It’s short and simple, but the straightforward arrangement sounds nice. Could definitely use a bit more dynamic variation though, as well as maybe a bit less of a robotic tempo. Very interesting song, keep it up!
Thank you for your feedback! I really appreciate it!
Yes, you are right, it could have been developed more interestingly. I am not very confident in writing piano melodies yet, so I can be straightforward.
Tempo can't be automated in flm, which makes it very difficult to work with. I am currently studying other mobile DAWs
I will try to listen to your advice, and thanks for the kind words
Still has your style, but with a more playful flair. And of course, chiptune instrumentation! I look forward to seeing where this account goes.
I’ve never heard a song in a scale like this, I love the tantalizing tension it creates throughout the whole song. It always resolves in the most curious ways too, which only adds to the mystique. Truly wonderful piece!
Thank you very much! It truly resolves in weird ways! :) This scale doesn't include many typical chords to play! It was a pretty interesting exercise that forced me out of my comfort zone, but I really would like to include that kind of sound in some compositions in the future
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