This is a pretty song, I really love the lyrics. The waltzy feel is also neat. The melody is very haunting like the previous reviewer mentioned, which is perfect for the vibe you were going for! Also, I love your voice… you’re truly talented.
A few critiques:
The vocals just don’t seem to flow all that well. In places, it just feels awkward. This is because the notes you are holding or putting emphasis on do not match up with the emphasized syllable of the word you’re singing… does that make sense? So bear that in mind when you’re writing your vocals. Secondly, the piano feels a little monotonous, flat. I’d recommend adding a bit of dynamic variation, and maybe a soft bit of reverb. You could also unquantize it slightly for a more human feel. All just suggestions!
You have a really cool sound that I would love to see you develop. Keep it up, Kekeyz!