Positives: the drums are very good. Everything about them is nice and crisp. You are very good at communicating which genre is being conveyed with the drum patterns. The song is also structured in an interesting, creative way. I liked the way you transitioned from one genre to the next seamlessly. Good job to both of you!
Negatives: the stringed instrument doesn’t fit the song very well imo, and its long release time muddles the notes together.
Some of the notes of the song kinda clashed a bit with the chords behind them, which caused a rather unpleasant dissonance.
Overall: This song has a lot of really interesting ideas that not many artists are attempting right now. However there were a few elements that were holding it back. Just keep going, keep making music, and stay inspired! This is a cool concept that I would like to hear more of!
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